标题: The Sea [打印本页] 作者: 莲步青云 时间: 2005-11-19 16:24 标题: The Sea I dreamt of the sea
When I was a little kid
It was pure blue
And clear to me
I dreamt of the sea
When I was depressed and grieved
It was dark, blurred
And vague to me
I dreamt of the sea
When I was growing up in family
It was nothing
But a bowl of water to me
I dreamt of the sea
When I tended to leave
It was salty
And bitter to me
I dreamt of the sea
I dreamt of touching the sea
And today it was the sea before me
It was not pure blue and clear like in dreams
It was not dark and vague all the time
It was not but a bowl of water
It was salty but not so bitter
It was what it is
Other than what it looks like
It was blue at some time
And was dark at other time
It was vague in summer
And became clear again in autumn
It looked peaceful and tranquil
And sometimes it was
Near the shore
It was howling and screaming
And often it was
In the far sea
I dreamt of the sea
For many years
But it was still
What it is in reality作者: 永无止境 时间: 2005-11-19 17:12
表妹，不好意思，没和你商量，我就把你题目里的中文部分去掉了，呵呵，THE SEA 这两个词已经很好了。作者: 一抹蓝云 时间: 2005-11-22 13:20
原创吗？很压韵啊作者: 凤尾竹 时间: 2005-11-22 15:54
瞧瞧人家，咱中文还说不利落，人家英语都写上诗了。PFPF！作者: 希曼 时间: 2005-11-22 18:15
so great!作者: 莲步青云 时间: 2005-11-22 20:00
是我的原创啊！
是和小永表姐同去北戴河后的感受
那天回来后
坐在北大的图书馆里
突然来了感觉
便写下了上面的话作者: 每周一练 时间: 2005-11-22 22:04
英文诗应该怎样押韵,有啥规矩吗?作者: 莲步青云 时间: 2005-11-24 18:47
规律很多
古体诗比较讲究压韵
有abab cdcd efef gg
还有 更多格式
但是现代诗就不必拘泥与格式了
比较随意